Restive
lying on the lap of the Wind
swirling with a rustle of paper leaves
rising and dipping like a kite unstrung
drifting whimsically like seeds of a dandelion,
a wish upon the heart
Boundless.
Spin a dance!
within the current of the Wind.
Step blithely!
into the flow of Things.
Oh, what a beautiful surrender!
What a beautiful surrender it is.
***

9 responses to “Flow of Things”
I am quite jealous of your ability to write vivid imagery without sounding flowery or glib. I wish to experience this beautiful surrender.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Not sure about ability…but its simply associations to feelings.
Well I admire how unapologetically raw like your tone is…to each their own then XD
LikeLike
“associations to feelings” (write that down, write that down!) ❤️😂 Thank you, as ever I am grateful of you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha! You’re welcome ❤
LikeLike
I can feel a slight breeze and the lift of the dandelions on the air. This poem felt like surrender.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Hi again! thank you for expressing how they read and felt to you, I’m glad they pulled you in so ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Spellbinding! This is magical, Rafia! I love the way you express yourself so swiftly, in such an artistic manner that makes everything seem so beautiful. Loved this ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad you feel that way about these pieces ^-^
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂🙂
LikeLike