Flow of Things

Poetry Dandelion against a sunset sky with seeds floating away with the wind

 lying on the lap of the Wind
swirling with a rustle of paper leaves
rising and dipping like a kite unstrung
drifting whimsically like seeds of a dandelion,
a wish upon the heart

Spin a dance!
 within the current of the Wind.
Step blithely!
 into the flow of Things.

Oh, what a beautiful surrender!
What a beautiful surrender it is.


9 responses to “Flow of Things”

  1. I am quite jealous of your ability to write vivid imagery without sounding flowery or glib. I wish to experience this beautiful surrender.

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    1. Not sure about ability…but its simply associations to feelings.
      Well I admire how unapologetically raw like your tone is…to each their own then XD


      1. “associations to feelings” (write that down, write that down!) ❤️😂 Thank you, as ever I am grateful of you.

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        1. Haha! You’re welcome ❤


  2. I can feel a slight breeze and the lift of the dandelions on the air. This poem felt like surrender.

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    1. Hi again! thank you for expressing how they read and felt to you, I’m glad they pulled you in so ❤

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  3. Spellbinding! This is magical, Rafia! I love the way you express yourself so swiftly, in such an artistic manner that makes everything seem so beautiful. Loved this ❤️

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    1. I’m glad you feel that way about these pieces ^-^

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