MindWraith

words of twilight

Few words.

Poetry A notebook with a blurred out quote written and an uncapped fountain pen placed on it, all in a backdrop of a black table.

How do I show you, you?
There is nothing greater
than holding a mirror
to give you
You..

A few words now
cobbled together
buffed and shined
over and over
a shard of a mirror
in the form of poetry

To show you
You..








Rafia Bilkis

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9 responses to “Few words.”

  1. AB Avatar
    AB

    I really loved the idea here. The first few lines hit hard. You have a wonderful way with words, Rafia! This was really nice!

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    1. Rafia Bilkis Avatar
      Rafia Bilkis

      Once again, thank you from my heart🤍😊

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      1. AB Avatar
        AB

        Always a pleasure 🙂

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  2. jahnavigouri13 Avatar
    jahnavigouri13

    So meaningful and heartfelt! I really loved this poem. So beautiful!!

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    1. Rafia Bilkis Avatar
      Rafia Bilkis

      Thank you for sharing your thoughts! ❤ I’m glad you loved it ^-^

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      1. jahnavigouri13 Avatar
        jahnavigouri13

        You are most welcome!!💛

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  3. schmitztimo Avatar
    schmitztimo

    Amazing! 🙂

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  4. Daily Poetry Avatar
    Daily Poetry

    Wonderful poem, it sure can be a mirror.

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    1. Rafia Bilkis Avatar
      Rafia Bilkis

      Thank you!

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