Devoured

Poetry chaotic colors on a black background

Demolish me in your chaos
I stand at the precipice
of edge of mind
waiting for the push
to tip over
ready for my next step
toes meeting air
the heart drop fall
into nothing
and be devoured in you







8 responses to “Devoured”

  1. Jeff Flesch Avatar
    Jeff Flesch

    Wow. Beautiful verse.

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    1. Rafia Bilkis Avatar
      Rafia Bilkis

      Thank you Jeff, for dropping by so often too! ❤

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      1. Jeff Flesch Avatar
        Jeff Flesch

        You’re most welcome, Rafia. Is always my pleasure. ❤️

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  2. Sunshine Kid Avatar
    Sunshine Kid

    “the precipice of the edge of mind” what a terrifying place to be. I’ll alert the rescue team.

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    1. Rafia Bilkis Avatar
      Rafia Bilkis

      Haha! Terrifying and weirdly liberating I think

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  3. AB Avatar
    AB

    “Toes meeting air
    The heart drop fall
    Into nothing”
    I really loved this part! It was intense but really beautifully crafted.

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    1. Rafia Bilkis Avatar
      Rafia Bilkis

      Yea..Its like those dreams where you fall and wake up XD and thank you!

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      1. AB Avatar
        AB

        You’re most welcome, Rafia 🙂

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