MindWraith

words of twilight

A moment in You

Poetry rain drops on a glass with a blurred background of green and lights

Time cease
when I fall in your spell
a moment
stretches to eternity—
misty breaths
stirrings of the heart
I surprise myself
when I awake
to the rhythm of life—
A Day has gone past
in an hour of the Hand.
In such moments, Love
I can believe

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Rafia Bilkis

October 11, 2021

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abstract, books, creative writing, eternity, free verse, literature, nature, Poetry, quotes, time

8 responses to “A moment in You”

Mommystudious

October 11, 2021 at 12:11 pm

You gotta compile them and publish a book!

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1. Rafia Bilkis
  
  October 11, 2021 at 8:04 pm
  
  Maybe, one day.. Thanks Maha! 🤍
  
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Sunshine Kid

October 11, 2021 at 12:36 pm

“A Day has gone past
in an hour of the Hand.” I love this phrase, I like to think of time as a place. We can choose to leave whenever we want

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1. Rafia Bilkis
  
  October 11, 2021 at 8:08 pm
  
  Yeah.. a place or umm like a state? that’s what it seems like.
  
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AB

October 11, 2021 at 8:57 pm

“misty breaths
stirrings of the heart”
Such beautiful words! I loved the way the words flowed in this one. Beautiful work, Rafia ❤

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1. Rafia Bilkis
  
  October 11, 2021 at 10:33 pm
  
  Thank you Akshay, everytime 💖
  
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  1. AB
    
    October 11, 2021 at 11:39 pm
    
    You’re welcome 🙂
    
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schmitztimo

January 3, 2022 at 4:40 am

You have such a deep mindset. I really like the way you describe that, it hit the nail!

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